Minor character

I like the mediator because she is the wise character who knows about things others did not. She is kind and caring to people. We do not know much about the mediator in the book. She is the most mysterious character to me, and I am intrigued by her. I wish the author would tell us more about her.

Taking stock of my work

I think I told my story well, especially the organization of the story. I made the story flow on. However, I can improve on the grammer and creativity of my story. I only wrote one draft before my final draft. I asked two people to edit my paper, and they corrected my grammer. Next time I would try to change my style of writing. I will try to be more creative.

A Gracious Plenty

I think the novel, A Gracious Plenty, is interesting. When I was a kid, I always wanted to be able to communicate with the dead. I wondered what it would be like after we are dead. The novel provided an answer to my questions about the afterlife. I hope it would stay interesting throughout the novel.